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A 3-hour package for students who want to improve the quality of a draft in a more joined-up way. We work on structure, criticality, and final editing so the piece becomes clearer, sharper, and more convincing overall.
This can be delivered online or offline:
online as a live working session
offline as a written review on your document
Designed for work of up to 4,000 to 5,000 words.
You want more than a quick fix
You are aiming for a First or Distinction
You are tired of putting in effort without seeing the mark move
Your draft has potential, but the structure, analysis, and final expression are still underperforming
You want a clearer process without becoming dependent on constant support
We work through the draft in three layers:
1. Structure
Clarify the argument, strengthen the line of reasoning, and sort the shape of the piece.
2. Criticality
Improve paragraph logic, evaluation, and stance so the writing does more than describe or summarise.
3. Final edit
Tighten flow, clarity, and expression so the final draft is cleaner, more controlled, and more effective.
Because this package is designed to be done in one focused block, the feedback is more joined-up and easier to apply across the whole draft.
focused support on structure, criticality, and final editing
feedback delivered either live online or as written comments on your document
a reusable self-edit checklist
a feedback interpreter to help you understand and apply comments more effectively
a Criticality Repair Sheet to help you strengthen weaker analysis across the rest of the draft
clear notes on what to cut, what to keep, and what to develop
a stronger final draft, plus a method you can reuse in future work
your assignment brief and marking criteria, if you have them
any feedback you have already received
your current draft, notes, or plan
any key sources or reading requirements, if relevant
This package is designed for work of up to 4,000 to 5,000 words.
Feedback is delivered either during the live session or as written feedback on the document, depending on the format you choose (you can have a mix of both if that is preferable).
A 3-hour package for students who want to improve the quality of a draft in a more joined-up way. We work on structure, criticality, and final editing so the piece becomes clearer, sharper, and more convincing overall.
This can be delivered online or offline:
online as a live working session
offline as a written review on your document
Designed for work of up to 4,000 to 5,000 words.
You want more than a quick fix
You are aiming for a First or Distinction
You are tired of putting in effort without seeing the mark move
Your draft has potential, but the structure, analysis, and final expression are still underperforming
You want a clearer process without becoming dependent on constant support
We work through the draft in three layers:
1. Structure
Clarify the argument, strengthen the line of reasoning, and sort the shape of the piece.
2. Criticality
Improve paragraph logic, evaluation, and stance so the writing does more than describe or summarise.
3. Final edit
Tighten flow, clarity, and expression so the final draft is cleaner, more controlled, and more effective.
Because this package is designed to be done in one focused block, the feedback is more joined-up and easier to apply across the whole draft.
focused support on structure, criticality, and final editing
feedback delivered either live online or as written comments on your document
a reusable self-edit checklist
a feedback interpreter to help you understand and apply comments more effectively
a Criticality Repair Sheet to help you strengthen weaker analysis across the rest of the draft
clear notes on what to cut, what to keep, and what to develop
a stronger final draft, plus a method you can reuse in future work
your assignment brief and marking criteria, if you have them
any feedback you have already received
your current draft, notes, or plan
any key sources or reading requirements, if relevant
This package is designed for work of up to 4,000 to 5,000 words.
Feedback is delivered either during the live session or as written feedback on the document, depending on the format you choose (you can have a mix of both if that is preferable).