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For messy drafts, weak structure, and writing that is not yet doing enough.
A 60-minute focused session to identify what is weakening your draft and fix the most important issue first, whether that is structure, argument, clarity, or critical analysis.
Available as a live online session or an offline document review with written feedback.
You do not know where to start
Your draft feels messy, vague, or all over the place
You keep getting feedback like “too descriptive”, “needs more critical analysis”, or “structure is unclear”
Your paragraphs sound academic, but are not doing enough work
You have ideas and sources, but the argument is not landing
Diagnose what is actually holding the draft back
Clarify the question and what it is really asking
Strengthen your argument line so the piece has a clearer direction
Improve structure, paragraph purpose, and critical analysis where needed
Rework 1 to 2 sections or paragraphs so you can see what stronger writing looks like in practice
Clear feedback on the section you submitted
1 to 2 improved sections or paragraphs, in your voice
A reusable self-edit checklist
Notes on what to cut, what to keep, and what to develop
Clear next steps, so you know what to fix first across the rest of the draft
Your assignment brief and marking criteria, if you have them
Any feedback you are trying to act on
Your plan, notes, or draft, up to 2,000 words
Please note: this session is designed to improve a focused part of your work, not to review an entire long assignment line by line. For longer drafts, a larger package is usually the better fit.
After payment, you’ll receive a link to book your session with me.
For messy drafts, weak structure, and writing that is not yet doing enough.
A 60-minute focused session to identify what is weakening your draft and fix the most important issue first, whether that is structure, argument, clarity, or critical analysis.
Available as a live online session or an offline document review with written feedback.
You do not know where to start
Your draft feels messy, vague, or all over the place
You keep getting feedback like “too descriptive”, “needs more critical analysis”, or “structure is unclear”
Your paragraphs sound academic, but are not doing enough work
You have ideas and sources, but the argument is not landing
Diagnose what is actually holding the draft back
Clarify the question and what it is really asking
Strengthen your argument line so the piece has a clearer direction
Improve structure, paragraph purpose, and critical analysis where needed
Rework 1 to 2 sections or paragraphs so you can see what stronger writing looks like in practice
Clear feedback on the section you submitted
1 to 2 improved sections or paragraphs, in your voice
A reusable self-edit checklist
Notes on what to cut, what to keep, and what to develop
Clear next steps, so you know what to fix first across the rest of the draft
Your assignment brief and marking criteria, if you have them
Any feedback you are trying to act on
Your plan, notes, or draft, up to 2,000 words
Please note: this session is designed to improve a focused part of your work, not to review an entire long assignment line by line. For longer drafts, a larger package is usually the better fit.
After payment, you’ll receive a link to book your session with me.