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A 5-hour deep review for dissertation or thesis work that needs clearer structure, stronger criticality, and sharper expression.
I work directly on your draft and supporting materials, adding tracked edits and high-level comments so you can see what is weakening the work, what needs developing, and what to fix first.
Delivered offline as written feedback on your document.
This is for you if:
your dissertation still feels shapeless, even though you have written a lot
your supervisor feedback is vague, limited, or non-existent
your work is still too descriptive and you cannot see how to make it more analytical
you keep rewriting sections without improving the quality of the thinking
you want rigorous feedback without endless meetings
This is not for you if:
you want someone to write the dissertation for you
you want unlimited ongoing support instead of focused feedback and suggested amendments
you need a full-draft review well beyond the word-count limit for one block
Over 5 hours of focused review time, I work directly on your document and supporting materials. You receive:
tracked edits and comments throughout the draft
structural feedback on argument, chapter flow, paragraph function, and clarity of claims
guidance on where criticality needs strengthening
notes on what to cut, what to keep, and what to develop
detailed feedback on your dissertation or thesis draft
tracked edits and high-level structural comments on the document
a reusable self-edit checklist
a feedback interpreter
a Criticality Repair Sheet
a lit review structure guide
clear priorities for what to fix first
To make the review precise, send:
your current draft, or the chapter(s) / section(s) you want reviewed
your brief, handbook guidance, and marking criteria, if available
any supervisor feedback you have received
your research question or working title, even if it is still evolving
Messy is fine. You do not need a polished draft before sending it.
This package covers up to 7,500 to 10,000 words of review.
That is usually enough for one substantial chapter or two shorter sections, depending on the density and stage of the work.
If your draft is longer than that, you can either focus on the section that needs the most urgent attention or book an additional 5-hour block.
If you want to talk through the feedback, you can add a 30-minute clarification call after the review.
Start with a 60-minute Structure Session and I’ll help you work out what will make the biggest difference first.
A 5-hour deep review for dissertation or thesis work that needs clearer structure, stronger criticality, and sharper expression.
I work directly on your draft and supporting materials, adding tracked edits and high-level comments so you can see what is weakening the work, what needs developing, and what to fix first.
Delivered offline as written feedback on your document.
This is for you if:
your dissertation still feels shapeless, even though you have written a lot
your supervisor feedback is vague, limited, or non-existent
your work is still too descriptive and you cannot see how to make it more analytical
you keep rewriting sections without improving the quality of the thinking
you want rigorous feedback without endless meetings
This is not for you if:
you want someone to write the dissertation for you
you want unlimited ongoing support instead of focused feedback and suggested amendments
you need a full-draft review well beyond the word-count limit for one block
Over 5 hours of focused review time, I work directly on your document and supporting materials. You receive:
tracked edits and comments throughout the draft
structural feedback on argument, chapter flow, paragraph function, and clarity of claims
guidance on where criticality needs strengthening
notes on what to cut, what to keep, and what to develop
detailed feedback on your dissertation or thesis draft
tracked edits and high-level structural comments on the document
a reusable self-edit checklist
a feedback interpreter
a Criticality Repair Sheet
a lit review structure guide
clear priorities for what to fix first
To make the review precise, send:
your current draft, or the chapter(s) / section(s) you want reviewed
your brief, handbook guidance, and marking criteria, if available
any supervisor feedback you have received
your research question or working title, even if it is still evolving
Messy is fine. You do not need a polished draft before sending it.
This package covers up to 7,500 to 10,000 words of review.
That is usually enough for one substantial chapter or two shorter sections, depending on the density and stage of the work.
If your draft is longer than that, you can either focus on the section that needs the most urgent attention or book an additional 5-hour block.
If you want to talk through the feedback, you can add a 30-minute clarification call after the review.
Start with a 60-minute Structure Session and I’ll help you work out what will make the biggest difference first.