3 Hour Package: Structure → Criticality → Final Edit (3×60 mins)

A 3-hour package for students who want to improve the quality of a draft in a more joined-up way. We work on structure, criticality, and final editing so the piece becomes clearer, sharper, and more convincing overall.

This can be delivered online or offline:

• online as a live working session

• offline as a written review on your document

Designed for work of up to 4,000 to 5,000 words.

Who it’s for

• You want more than a quick fix

• You are aiming for a First or Distinction

• You are tired of putting in effort without seeing the mark move

• Your draft has potential, but the structure, analysis, and final expression are still underperforming

• You want a clearer process without becoming dependent on constant support

How it works

We work through the draft in three layers:

1. Structure
Clarify the argument, strengthen the line of reasoning, and sort the shape of the piece.

2. Criticality
Improve paragraph logic, evaluation, and stance so the writing does more than describe or summarise.

3. Final edit
Tighten flow, clarity, and expression so the final draft is cleaner, more controlled, and more effective.

What you leave with

• focused support on structure, criticality, and final editing

• session delivered either live online or as written comments on your document

• clear notes on what to cut, what to keep, and what to develop

• a stronger final draft

What to send before we start

• your assignment brief and marking criteria, if you have them

• any feedback you have already received

• your current draft, notes, or plan

• any key sources or reading requirements, if relevant

Please note

This package is designed for work of up to 4,000 to 5,000 words.
Feedback is delivered either during the live session or as written feedback on the document, depending on the format you choose (you can have a mix of both if that is preferable).